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Friday 15 July 2016

Rio peom

If a went to Rio my life would be new

If a left Rio my life is not cool

To enjoy a breeze a fresh smell of air

So if you want to go take your friend it's fair


2 comments:

  1. Hi Prudence! Wow, I really like your poem. It is fantastic! I especially like the final line that talks about bringing your friends. I think that they would love to come with you. I know that I would! If you were really going to Rio next month, who would you bring with you? If it was me, I would bring my son Aronui, my mom, my dad, and my sister, Leigh.

    Who would you bring?

    Cheers, Rachel :)

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  2. Hello Prudence. Wow! I really like your pome about going to Rio and the picture of Tom and Vinicius. If you were in Rio and you were in the Olympic which sport would you want to play in?. Keep up the good work, your a star.

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